studying writing successfully

Studying writing successfully

When I studied writing, I felt bored. It causes many assignments that I got. I also confused because I should do many steps during write my essay. My lecturer said that it is the perfect steps to be a good writer. My lecturer also said that I should make draft before I make an essay. Not only that, but I also do revision before I give my essay to my lecturer. It was make me so confused and did not want to do it again.

            For the first step in making an essay is making draft. When I have finished make drafting and to be an essay, I should give my essay to my peer in the class. After my peer corrected, I made a new essay if I have mistakes in my essay. After I have finished improve my essay, I gave my essay to my group in the class. It is about four students. And then I improved it again. I did like that until all of my class revision my essay about ten students. The last revision, it could give to the lecturer. However, I should have all of revision about 7 papers. If I did not have 7 papers, my lecturer did not want accept my essay.

            Now, I am doing my second essay. Before I am finish my first essay, my lecturer asked me to make my second essay. My lecturer said that I should do all of the steps that I did before. I felt tired to make and do many steps that I could not. However, it is my duty during study essay writing. I will try to make a good essay that everyone like and interest to read it. I also hope that what I want and what I do does not meaningful.

Before I learnt about writing, I thought that writing is not important. However, I was wrong because writing is important. When I did not know how to write very well, I could not make a creation from my ideas on my mind. It is not good because what I want and what I think can make changes in my life.

I can write something that I think without feel afraid to fail. Before I write it, I should read first. It can add my knowledge and give me some information about what I want to write. I am not only read, but I should understand what writer means. It will make me to more understand and also can give me motivation to write like what I want.

Make sure yourself that you can write. You can make something that can motivation someone to do what you tell in your creation. You can make a creation that everyone like and the readers give a good perception to your creation. You also can learn by yourself from your ideas or others. It will make you be better than before.

the benefit studying writng

The benefits studying writing

            Studying writing can make my life be better than before. I can get some benefit from it in my life. It is not easy for me to understand to make an essay. It is difficult and confused. If I talk about the benefit that can I get from it, I have some benefit that I get. For example, when I studied writing, I got motivation to write what I want because I do not like writing before. I also know more about writing. I can make something that everyone like and interest from my ideas. It is something important that can I get from studying writing.

            In academic, I can learn more and know the rules about writing. When I joined in essay writing class, I did not know what I should do. I used to write without think about grammatical, tenses, and words. I think that the rules in writing are not important because writing is only writing. Now, I know about that. I also apply it in my essay and make a good essay although I still have some troubles about grammar, tenses and words.

            After I know everything about writing, I can share what I know and anything that I can share in my environment. I can tell everyone that their ideas can make changes in their life. I will motivate them. They also will be a good writer and famous writer. After that, they can give motivation to someone that do not like writing before to develop their ideas on the paper, mass media, magazine, and etc. So that, knowledge is important for someone to know and share their knowledge.

discussion essay

The Advantages and Disadvantages of TV for Children

TV is one of mass media that can give us some information. Everyone use it like that and everyone have it. Some of people only use TV to watching some programs that they like. When they are watching TV, they do not think about what can get from it. They just think that watching TV only an activity to spend their free time. Watching TV is one of our activities in our free time every day. Many people do like that especially children. Parents should pay attention what their children watch. It is important to know the effects of TV program gives to our children. Some of TV programs give negative effects and also positive effects. If TV shows the programs that can make negative effects for our children, it will feel more of our children. On the contrary, if TV shows the programs that good for our children and educates, it will be better than negative effects for our children. So, parents should pay attention their children about the effect of watching TV.

American Academy of Pediatrics recommendation the children under 2 years old cannot watching TV at all and the children who 2-6 years old only watch TV 1-2 hours one day. It is reality. Many parents will follow this recommendation when they realize that TV can influence their children. Whereas children can do something else that can useful than watching TV.

Many negative effects that can our children get from watching TV. It depend on what the program that our children watch. When our children watching TV, we should pay attention about what our children saw. We should know what the good program for our children to watch and contrary. As you know that children easier to get what they watch and want to do like what they saw before. Children have a stronger memory to save and do what they see. Many parents forget about that. They only want their children happy when their children watching what they like without think effects from what their children watch.

By watching TV will make our children accustomed to watching TV without think what should they do like do their homework. It also causes obesity to our children because they are sitfor a long time. We should pay attention what time our children should spend their time when they watch and also how long they watch. It will increase the effect of watching TV. A research finds that children who watching TV will strength weight. Not only that, many doctors tell that TV is danger source for children behavior whose have sexual. It will develop sexual instinct to children. TV also causes our children anarchic act. It will make them to be juvenile delinquency and to be bad person. A research tells that 70 percent parents forbid anarchic act that causes a story or film that TV show to children.

In addition, most of in the TV programs have advertisement. It used to promote some products like foods, clothes, cigarettes, etc. It also has advertisement like a sarcastic. People who are show the advertisement that can give bad effect for children never think about it. They just think how they products can sell. When the children see it, they want to know and also want to buy what the advertisement show to them. They do that without think the effects for their health from what they buy like when they want to buy some food. They do not know that the food have high calories or has substances that not well for they health. It is not good for them.

Parents should not only focus to negative effect from watching TV because in other side watching TV also has positive effects for our children. So that, parents should not be afraid when their children watch TV. Many things that can our children get from watching TV. When they see the programs that they like, they will follow what the program tells to them. For example, when they watching programs that show how to read, write, and sing a song that they never know before. They will follow and apply it in their life. It is a lesson that they get from what they watched without waiting for their parents to teach them. They also can get information from watching TV about everything what did happened in the world. It is good for her to develop their knowledge.

A research from University of Siena tells that the children can find composure and also the effect to disappear painful when they watch cartoon film. So, a little entertain like cartoon will be a source to help the children to disappear painful and stressful. It can make them to interest and cheat the character that they like and make them more confidence to develop their talent when their watch what they like and to do. Macbeth, 1996, also tells that the children use the TV as a media to study and media entertain.

As a result, parents should pay attention about what their children do like watching TV. We should give good programs to educates them and control what should they watch and what should not they watch. It will not make them to do negative effect and apply it in their environment. We also control the time to watch and study. Do not make our children spend their free time to watch TV, but also make them to study. That is why, family is important to protect and pay attention our children to be a good child and young generation.

experience studying writing

 My experience during studying writing

            For the first time, I studied writing, I was afraid to fail and could not understand what the lecturer said. I can stand in writing because I did not like to write what I think. I was afraid that many people does not accept my creation. I also get many problems in grammatical, punctuations, and tenses.

            The lecturer said that writing is important because writing can help me to know that my ideas can give motivation to others people. It is good for me and others. And then, I tried to make a good creation that can make motivation and interest to my creation like essay in writing class.

            In the writing, I do not only writing, but I should pay attention about the rules in writing. It makes me easy to write my ideas. However, I did not think that it important for me to develop my ideas before. In addition, I did not attention about that because I just think that writing is writing. After I knew about that, I will try to make something like novel, book, and etc.

movie report 1 Race to witch mountain

Name : Silvia Septry Yanti. M

NIM : 1300915

Class : K2-13

Movie report 1

Race to Witch Mountain

Character:    

1.      Dwayne Johnson as Jack Bruno: kind, help, responsibilty.

2.      Alexander Ludwing as Dr. Alex Friedman: kind.

3.      Ciaran Hinds as Seth: ambitious, kind.

4.      Carla Gugino as Sara: never give up, kind.

About the film:

Directed by : Andy Fickman.

Produced by: Andrew Bunn.

Written by: Andy Fickman and Mark Bomback.

Music: Trevor Rabin.

Distributed by: Walt Disney, Motion Pictures.

Release dates: March 13, 2009.

Running Times: 98 minutes.

Synopsis:

            The film tells us about a UFO. It’s landed in the earth. One night a spaceship landed in a forest. The police of America tried to identify it. They found a big plane look like cigar but they couldn’t find anything there and they brought that air plane to a museum. What will happen with the UFO? Who does bring that UFO?.

Plot:

Introduction:

            At the first time Jack Bruno (Dwayne Johnson) as a taxi driver dropped Dr. Alex Friedman (Alexander Ludwing) to a hotel to direct a meeting about UFO. She has been studied about UFO for a long time. She believed that there is a UFO in the world but everyone judge her like a crazy woman included Jack. Jack didn’t believe that.

Climax:

            One day Jack Bruno got two passengers Seth (Ciaran Hinds) and Sara (Carla Gugino) who wanted to go to a place that really far from that town. Actually they were an Alien but they like a human. They wanted to take chip of spaceship in a hut of suburb area, without that chip they can’t back to the planet. So they asked Jack to accompany them to go there. Seth and Sara said that they were an Alien but Jack didn’t believe that. They tried to make him believe with showed their ability that impossible to do by a human. They could lift anything without it.

            Before it, Seth and Sara stole some money from ATM. They can do it easily because they had a power. Then the police tried to catch them but the police fail. Actually Jack didn’t want to help them but the Alien really needed his hand. Finally Jack wanted to accompany them to go to the hut. On the way they got many problems. The police always tried to catch that Alien but Jack still kept them. Arrived in that hut, the Alien took the chip but it was not easy. There was a big monster who wanted to kill that children because of Jack’s hand they success to get it.

Ending:          

After that, they came back to the town and they want to take on the chip in the spaceship. John can’t do anything because he didn’t understand about it. Then he remembered about Dr. Alex Friedman. Alex knew everything about UFO. Jack asked to Alex to help Seth and Sara. They went to the museum to steal the spaceship but in the museum, the police caught that children and brought them into a place that nobody knows it. Actually they wanted to take a power of that Alien from their heard but Jack and Alex could stop it. The Alien successes to put that chip in their spaceship. Bruno and Friedman become successful authors of Race to Witch Mountain: A True Story. They promote their book and knowledge on the UFO convention circuit, explaining that the publicity protects them from government reprisal. As they leave a convention the alien device activates, implying that the teenagers may be returning to Earth. They back to their planet and jack really happy because he could help the Alien.      

Moral value:

            We have to help each other as well as we can even thought that we don’t know that person and try to believe something because it will help us. We know about what Jack do in this film. He helps the alien. He helps without look that who we are. He just think how to helps someone. We can learn that if we want to help someone, we shouldn’t look who you are. We will get new experiences if we want to know about something.